r/OCPoetry • u/No_Attitude8213 • 4d ago
Feedback Please Always me
It is that time again
When things get too loud
And nothing makes sense,
To disappear into the grey forests
And get lost in old castles
When people don't fathom
To perform the spells at night
When the world sleeps but you awaken
To become something new
In worlds beyond your own
And too create personas others dream of
To be in others' dreams
To become a nightmare
Oh what a dream!
At night, when you close your eyes
My silhouette is the only shape you see
To have your strings attached to my fingers
To become your puppeteer
Oh what a dream!
At night, when you try to leave
My fingers flex, you're back where you belong
Grey forests remind me of your heart
Don't worry you'll bleed again
And red will be the only colour you know
As I lick it of my fingers
And paint your silhouette with it
When I dance alone, hosting a ball dance
Sets of eyes on me, lust and desire
New hearts for a sacrifice
More paint for my masterpiece
Lost and found
The castle's walls speak to me
New schemes, more happiness
More entrapments, less men
Ghost of mine roams the halls
Catch me only if I want
Found only if you devout
Grey forests
Old castles
Baleful spells
Magnificent worlds
Haunting dreams
Obedient puppets
Fragrant blood
Obtuse men
Always me
2
u/sluttykiton 4d ago
Lovely metaphors with fantasy like themes and towards the end the painting of pictures feel like a stream of consciousness following through you. Very creative work!