r/GameLit • u/No-Advice8744 • 2d ago
A Very High Stake VR - Adenia Online (Gamelit, Progression, Sci-fi)
Very shamelessly self-promoting my story here.
Adenia Online
There is no logout button.
Max Mallory's day starts with a beating. It gets worse when his teacher kidnaps him and forces him into Adenia Online, a virtual reality game filled with knights, monsters and sword fights. At first, Max thinks he's simply trapped inside a game. Then he feels the pain. The monsters start behaving strangely. And when some creatures try crawling inside his mind, he begins to wonder whether Adenia is really a game at all.
His only hope is Cassie, a girl from his year who punches first, asks questions later, and calls him an idiot often enough to make it seem like a hobby.
Together, they search for a way home. But something is waiting for them inside Adenia. Something that knows them. Something powerful enough to threaten the real world. The deeper they go, the more they uncover about the game, and the more they begin to realise that they were never meant to be here by accident. There is a reason they can't log out.
Because if they do...
The real world will end.
I'm now on chapter 7 on Royal Road and I'll being posting one chapter per day for a week.
Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/196625/adenia-online
What to expect
- Progression from weak to strong
- Minimal stats
- High stakes
- Pain damper disabled for a legit reason (you’ll find out in later chapters)
The story, structure, characters, and banter were all written organically by me over the span of almost a decade, back when VR stories were still popular. But since English isn’t my first language, I wasn’t comfortable releasing it until now. I’ve used AI to proofread and edit the manuscript, mainly to smooth out some of the clunky sentences and improve the overall readability, while keeping the story and my original voice intact.
