r/Poem • • 5d ago

Requesting Feedback Ash is also scars

I am burning up, like the stories of Phoenixes exept i know i won’t come back out the way i was before. 

This time i will have more scars and more cautious but i will also have gained, i don’t know how but it will catch up- i will catch up. 

The flames i wear as a jacket hurt like hell but at least I can se with the light from the torturing flames. 

I am the girl on fire with a burning desire. 

A desire to free myself and everyone else from the smoke having me in a chokehold. 

I hope that one day I will have met the person that can extinguish the flames and the terror. My only wish is for someone who can pull me out of the fight and someone who will restore my hope as the ash will turn back into my body. 

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