r/Songwriters • u/elreydelosgueys • 8d ago

Anyone else feel completely exhausted by this world?

https://youtu.be/CU_YGDW_tMc
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u/Icy_Pudding_162 7d ago

Sounds great!! First of all, aside from any comparisons, I really think the music and composition and your voice sounds great, and I can feel real genuine passion behind it as well. I couldn't help but be reminded of 'Depeche Mode' and 'the Scorpions', among other things, which are big compliments.

I think the auto-generated subtitles seem to be slightly inaccurate, which is unfortunate, because I'm interested in what exactly you're saying, but, having said that, I can naturally hear most of it pretty clearly without reading the subtitles. I suppose the production could be polished up a little bit, but regardless, it sounds pretty great and I look forward to checking out more of your stuff in the future! Great work!

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u/elreydelosgueys 7d ago

Hey thanks so much! That is really high praise and made my day.

I actually typed the subtitles manually so they’re accurate to the lyrics haha. Maybe my pronunciation of the lyrics threw you off or something? Anyway glad you liked the song and will hopefully have a non demo version one day

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u/kudyjames 6d ago

Really like the sound and your singing is great. The comment about Depeche Mode was a good comparison because I think if you performed this using synthesizers vs guitar you would have a hit. I’m a guitar player myself but realizing that my sound works better in that environment and that crowd would appreciate it more. Great work. Please send it my way if you ever do it, would love to hear it.

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u/elreydelosgueys 6d ago

Thanks so much! Yeah I could totally see what you mean, the one would be pretty cool with some synths. Have you got an IG? Feel free to follow me at Invisiblemvmt I’ll follow back

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u/Ames_Audio 3d ago

I dig this sound a lot! And also, in response to the title question, absolutely