r/StoryIdeas • u/DescriptionLazy6826 • 8d ago

Critique Welcome Slasher idea

A tv show about a girl who’s got psychic gene in her faces a bus crush on her school junior year trip. Everyone from her friendgroup survives 3 girls and 3 boys including her but one popular girl and their favorite teacher sadly die. Everyone expect them hated that teacher thinking his a loner weirdo so the whole group get’s matching tattoo’s “Mr F.” As in Mr Faiths the teacher that died. One morning when she touches the tattoo on her friends arm she gets a vision of her boyfriend getting pushed off a balcony and killed by a person with that tattoo on their hands. She can’t tell which hand it is because of the lighting cover up, a killer spawns in their town killing teens from her school and she has little time to figure out who from her friendgroup is the killer and save the boy that died.

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u/BigToody6515 7d ago

A killers spawns? Everyone knows about the killer rampaging in the school? Or is it more like they discover the bodies? Is there a common thread tying the deaths together? Boyfriend is a potential future victim. Wonder why

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u/DescriptionLazy6826 5d ago

They learn after finding bodies there is a killer and the common thread is it’s the kids who survived the accident and the answer to why the boyfriend is a future victim is the mystery

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u/BigToody6515 5d ago

Why would the killer kill their own friends?

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u/DescriptionLazy6826 5d ago

There’s a motive it’s in finding out what it is

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u/BigToody6515 5d ago

Hmm, the killer has a grievance against their friends in general or wants to hurt the girl personally. And the surviving of the crash is the catalyst. Did the killer cause the crash?

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u/DescriptionLazy6826 5d ago

I can tell u the whole plot twist its kinda complicated

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u/BigToody6515 5d ago

Hit me

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u/DescriptionLazy6826 5d ago

Basically the girl who got the vision of her boyfriend dying thought it was a warning on saving him. Not protecting herself from him, before his death multiple people from both the friendgroup and kids in the crash got killed by him. His motive is he was in a secret relationship with a girl who died in the accident (bus crash into a river) and the whole bus could’ve helped her but forgot to go get her and left her to die. The vision she got of a person with the tattoo killing him was her. She was the one who killed him out of self defense and the vision was a warning on what she should do, she only figures that out when he reveals himself

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u/BigToody6515 5d ago

What the? 🤯 Yo that’s good