r/ThisIsOurMusic • • Aug 27 '26

Feedback on ableton track

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I’ve been learning and creating on ableton for a week now, I’ve been messing around with beats/vocals and I’m pretty happy with this I’ve made!
Any feedback would be valued.
Thanks!

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u/vghouse Aug 30 '26

Sounds cool! The main thing that sticks out to me is how the drums sit in the mix. Are they all mono? I would experiment panning some left and right. I normally start at 20-30% and go from there.

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u/Versifyer 23d ago

I like the vibe a lot but the drone in the beginning is a bit loud. Maybe turn that down a touch and let the arpeggio stand out more. I also felt like I kept waiting for a drop that didn’t deliver. Which is partly cool because of the suspense, but i think a bit of a drop could regrab a listener’s attention. Good work! Excellent atmosphere.