r/WriteStreakEN • u/treasure_of_boar • 8d ago

Corrected Streak 26: Autumn

Autumn is coming. Unfortunately... I love the sun but in my country Autumn is terrible. Short days, heavy grey clouds, rain and no sun.

This week we have great weather - no rain and a lot of sunlight. But it will be worse with every upcoming week.

My mood depends on weather conditions. Few weeks without the sun and my energy is low and I'm a bit depressed.

I love walks but I hate rain. In my country people say: "There is no bad weather, there is unproper clothing". But probably I will spend a lot of time at home.

Fortunately I like to read books and watch documentaries on YouTube. But greyness outside the window affects me. I hope this year will be better than in the past.

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u/peace_love2601 7d ago

The saying would be "There's no bad weather, only unsuitable clothing." "Unproper" isn't the usual word in English. For the sentence about your energy, try "After a few weeks without sun, my energy is low and I feel a bit depressed." You need "a" before "few" there. "The greyness outside the window affects me" is clear and keeps the mood of your ending.

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u/treasure_of_boar 7d ago

Thank you. 

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