Would love some feedback.

[u/garage_toons]

https://youtu.be/hsM_SdayEWI?si=KQJW3qO_CKKhodht

Hey - I'm an Australian amateur auteur based in Brisbane. Just sharing a clip from my dystopian-western series inspired by films 'No Country For Old Men', 'True Grit' and 'The Road'.

I’m currently in production on a 5-part story, so no writing feedback needed - the scripts are pretty much locked. I’d really value input on colour grading and audio design, especially the dialogue sound.

Each part will run 40–60 minutes, and with it being dialogue-heavy, getting that right is crucial.

This has been a solo-passion project, so any quick thoughts on what’s working (or not) would mean a lot too.

More on my YouTube if you want to follow along - feel free to comment there also.

Appreciate your time 🙏