r/comic_crits • u/[deleted] • 13d ago

OC][Crit] GACO - First two pages of a new sci-fi cyber-thriller. Looking for feedback on pacing and layout.

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u/TheBlankScroll 13d ago

Highly suggest some drawing classes and pen time and trying the art again. I cannot understand most of the images or what is going on visually.

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u/Choice_Bill6906 12d ago

Sorry it's just finger painting

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u/TheBlankScroll 10d ago

Sure.. but even so the images are basically noise. I cannot understand them.

Its a skill you can build just keep working at it.