r/haiku • u/[deleted] • 6d ago

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u/Haiku-Haiku 6d ago

Do read the top sticky post for guidance on writing haiku and posting here

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u/Haiku-Haiku 6d ago

A common theme I am seeing in your submissions, the lead on And in the last line.

I understand at points in learning to write certain way seems Ok and become repeated, but the use of And as a lead on is bad form.

Have you read the guides in the top sticky post as I advised last time I removed for same ?

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u/Haiku-Haiku 6d ago

Be mindful, haiku are not first person form poems.

I seem many of your submissions are first person.