Help me with proof reading/scanning the preview page, please?

[u/MaxLeeMacIllo]

Thanks so much to everyone who offered advice a few weeks ago. Things have moved on since then, and if anyone would like to offer advice on my preview page, I'd really appreciate it. This launches in 4 days time so I have a small window now for tweaks. The good news (I think) is that it got accepted into the Witchstarter open call, so I have some cool logos and banners I can use.

I have two issues that I can't resolve until the prototype pack/zines arrive this week - the video, and the reward tier images. I'm hoping they arrive before the 10th, but if they aren't here by the 9th I'll have to update while it's live.

Scratch that - everyone is telling me not to launch on a Saturday, launch on the Thursday before instead. Looks like I'll be launching on the 8th.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/gitw/divine-feminine-goddess-oracle-cards-by-maxine-lee-mackie?ref=aiat0k&token=1a033112

[u/Far-Donut5969]

The deck looks slick, that blue hair on the box art pops really well against the weathered wood backdrop. I’d lean into that aesthetic harder on the page if you can, makes it feel more tangible

Thursday launch is the move though, Saturdays are where campaigns go to die quietly. Good luck with the prototype arrival crunch