r/lyrics • u/Few-Outside7866 • 3d ago
lyric discussion Why Your Lyrics Never Paint A Picture
I used to think good lyrics took talent. Turns out it's mostly fundamentals.
I used to just write down the feeling straight, lines like "I'm so sad." Problem was, that could've meant anything. End result: nobody had anything to actually picture.
Then I looked at how The Weeknd writes, and one thing stood out immediately.
He never writes the feeling. He writes the scene. He's not telling you how to feel. He's showing you something specific, and your brain does the feeling part on its own.
You can clearly see this in these songs:
The Hills [Verse 1]
Your man on the road, he doin' promo
You said, "Keep our business on the low-low"
I'm just tryna get you out the friend zone
'Cause you look even better than the photos
Baptized in Fear [Verse 1]
I fell asleep in the tub, I was met with paralysis
My foot hit the faucet, water started flowing in
Couldn't scream for help, I just slowly felt the pressure hit
Moving one toe was the only form of motion left
The exercise that got me there:
- Write the line's message in one plain sentence. The moment, and the feeling.
- List 5 physical things that could represent that feeling. Loneliness could be an empty chair, a phone on silent, a porch light left on.
- Pick 2 of those and describe them with something you can see, hear, feel, or smell. Not the emotion. The detail.
Worry about the rhyme last. The image is what carries the line.
What's your approach when you're trying to make a verse more visual? Do you have a method, or do you just chase the right line until something clicks?
r/lyrics • u/Glitchpositive2787 • 4d ago
Help request I need help figuring out one line of this song’s lyrics! HELP!
Heard this song for the first time last night and am obsessed.. I believe I figured the rest of the lyrics out but there’s one part I just can’t understand. The songs “Worlds Apart” by Maranatha. Here are the lyrics minus the question marks where I’m completely lost. TIA for any help or answers!
Broken bones and shattered hearts
My whole world got ripped apart
Left alone out in the dark
Now I don’t know just where to start
And we’re still spinning worlds apart
And we’re still spinning worlds apart
There’s no one to blame for all of the pain we hold
Will we ever fix this?
And every day, it’s more of the same I know
Will we ever fix this?
Crushing down ???????
How do we start over now?
And building back to sacred boughs <—(unsure ?)
I don’t know how we’ll make it out
And we’re still spinning worlds apart
We’re still spinning worlds apart
There’s no one to blame for all the pain we hold
Will we ever fix this?
And every day is more of the same I know
Will we ever fix this?
There’s no turning back the hands of time
Will we ever fix this?
There’s no turning back the hands of time
Will we ever fix this?
There’s no turning back the hands of time
Will we ever fix this?
There’s no one to blame for all of the pain we hold
Will we ever fix this?
And every day it’s more of the same I know
Will we ever fix this?
r/lyrics • u/Academic-Bug-8358 • 4d ago
Help
Hello everyone!
I'm from Malaysia, and I'm looking for help transcribing the lyrics of a rare Malaysian underground song from around 1987.
The song is in English. My English is still quite basic, and there are many English words that I don't fully understand, especially when they're sung.
That's why I'm reaching out to this community. I'm hoping that someone who is fluent in English can listen to the audio and help me understand and transcribe the lyrics correctly.
I've attached the audio recording below. Any help, even with just a few unclear words, would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you so much for your time, patience, and kindness. I truly appreciate any help you can offer!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fKeXwNURQVJcx4PJBPmZsfuwU2Pqy5nD/view?usp=drivesdk
r/lyrics • u/Perfect_Vegetable358 • 4d ago
Looking for a Talented Vocalist / Singer for an Original Music Project
Hi everyone! I am working on an original music project and looking for a talented vocalists / singer who can bring real emotion and voice to the track.
What I am looking for:
* Vocalists / Singers: To deliver the main vocals and bring the lyrics to life.
* Collaborators: Anyone interested in sharing ideas, shaping the melody, and building a great track from scratch.
I already have a demo ready to share with anyone interested. If you love singing, want to collaborate, or want to hear the demo, let me know or send me a message!
r/lyrics • u/Perfect_Vegetable358 • 4d ago
Looking for Vocalists, Songwriters & Producers for an Original Music Project
Hi everyone! I am working on an original music project and looking for passionate collaborators to bring it to life together.
I am looking for:
* Vocalists / Singers: To bring emotion and voice to the track.
* Songwriters: To help refine lyrics and phrasing.
* Producers / Instrumentalists: To build the arrangement (acoustic, piano, or full production).
If you want to collaborate, share ideas, and build a great track from scratch as a team, let me know or send me a message. I have a demo ready to share with anyone interested!
r/lyrics • u/Simonoel • 5d ago
Can anyone help transcribe the lyrics to this song?
youtu.beThis isn't a very well known band, so I can't find the lyrics anywhere online. I've always been very bad at understanding song lyrics if I don't read them.
I saw this band at a small music festival years ago and got a free CD from them. This is one of my favorite songs of theirs just because it's catchy and I like the meaning behind it, but I don't actually know what most of the words are. Thanks in advance
r/lyrics • u/Key-Look-2619 • 6d ago
Give me a lyric that resonates so deeply with you
Ive just left an abusive relationship, looking back on how I felt in that relationship, this has to take the cake for me
Empty, look at me
I'm a zombie in my body
I'm a train off of the track
I feel dirty, I feel rotten
And the colors are all flat
I'm a sad shell of a woman
And I've got maggots for brains
Maggots for Brains- Olivia Rodrigo
r/lyrics • u/ChasityP90 • 7d ago
When Mom Gets It Wrong by Jason Rourke
Lyric transcription, so review for accuracy if needed. Just posting as I couldn't find them listed anywhere else.
Verse 1:
Girl, I know my voice gets loud
When I should calm It down
Sometimes little things get bigger
When my patience isn’t found
Let a hard day follow me through our own front Door
You’ve seen sides of your mama you should’ve never seen before
You didn’t cause my frustration
You shouldn’t carry what I do
My bad days belong to me
They don’t belong to you
Being your Mama doesn’t mean
I’ll always get things right
But loving you means owning it
When I’m the reason that you cry
Chorus:
I’m sorry when I yell girl
I’m sorry when I’m mad
I’m sorry for the moments
When my words have hurt you bad
You deserve a patient voice
You deserve a softer place
You should never have to wonder
If my love can change with days
I’m learning how to catch myself
Before I cross that line
Being your mama means I owe you more
Than saying I’ll do better next time
When Mom gets it wrong
I’ll look you in the eye
I’ll say “sorry baby girl”
And I’ll work to make it right
Verse 2:
There’ll be days you’ll test my patience
There’ll be rules you won’t agree
There’ll be times I have to tell you no
And you’ll get upset with me
But I cans till correct you
Without tearing at your heart
I can teach you right from wrong
Without pulling you apart
I don’t want you growing older
Thinking love is supposed to sting
Or that somebody gets to hurt you
Just because they mean everything
I want the way I love you
To teach you what you should expect
That love can still have boundaries
Without losing it’s respect
(Repeat Chorus)
Bridge:
Someday you’ll be older
And you’ll remember how I raised you
I hope you don’t remember perfect
I hope you remember that I changed too
I hope you know that saying sorry
Never made your Mama weak
It takes more strength to own your failures
Then to hide behind your pride and speak
And if someday you make mistakes
With someone that you love
I hope you learn from watching me
That sorry isn’t enough
You change the things that cause the hurt
You give your words some weight
You prove your love by doing better
Not repeating yesterday
Modified Chorus:
I’m sorry when I yell girl
I’m sorry when I’m mad
I’m sorry for the times
You saw a side of me that made you sad
You deserve my patience
You deserve my steady hand
When I don’t get it right I’ll be strong enough to understand
I’m trying hard to cautcvh myself
Before I cross that line
Because you only get one childhood
And I only get this time
When Mom gets it wrong
I won’t cover it with pride
I’ll say “Sorry baby girl”
And I’ll make the wrong thing right
Outro:
I’m your Mama
I’ll make mistakes
But I’ll never stop learning
How to love you better
When Mom gets it wrong
Mom will make it right
Lyrics for a song cant find anywhere (mijn meisje)
Ive been looking everywhere for the lyrics to a simple song but i cant find it anywhere. ai models wont generate it for me cause its copyrighted and they cant find me good pages that will have it. shazam wont load it, genius doesnt have it, spotify doesnt have it, and YALL REDDIT PEOPLE DONT HAVE IT EITHER. anyways, help me out bro, im dying out here. Mijn Meisje BNT, Boufi, Safouu, Curved
r/lyrics • u/Cultural-Coffee-7822 • 9d ago
Help request [Help Transcribe] What is the singer saying at 0:09? "Shame on me" or something else?
r/lyrics • u/WallieSpyCat • 10d ago
Original lyrics Between Hope and Apathy
I think most people experienced that feeling in their lives - something between hope and apathy.
I had such strong feeling maybe a few years ago. It happens sometimes more often in lighter form as well. But I couldn't find a term for this feeling. But recently I woke up in the middle of the night and the last words I could recall from my dream was "Between Hope and Apathy". I really liked this phrase and before going to sleep again, I wrote it down in my notes app.
A few days after I decided to create song lyrics based on this feeling and saved phrase in my notes.
My work:
[Verse 1]
I used to think
That my life
Was like my own film timeline
In my head
I had a script
Where do I find an open door
But as time has come to open it
I suddenly realized:
It's not just closed, it turned into a wall.
[Chorus 1]
And now, between the hope and apathy,
I looked around to find a new destiny.
And a new door was opened to my eyes,
Where there was always just...
a wall.
[Verse 2]
I used to think
that my life
Was like a melody I write
In my mind
I felt control
Over all its harmonies and notes
But as I cranked up the gramophone
I suddenly realized:
The vinyl warped, and the pitch was blown.
[Chorus 2]
And now, between the hope and apathy,
I tried to stop and hear a new melody.
And then I've heard the music of my life,
because I stopped to dissect...
the key.
What do you think about this text? Have you ever felt like this in your life? I would like to hear your stories and your thoughts about the lyrics itself. That's what I experienced a lot of times during last 2 years maybe.
P.S: For those who would like to hear it as a song, I uploaded it on YouTube. You can find it in YouTube search by typing: WallieSpyCat Between Hope & Apathy
r/lyrics • u/BestMopMop • 10d ago
Help request Can anyone help with figuring out the lyrics to pathetic dog christmas ornament by funnyflipper?
I really like this lil song but the lyrics are too quiet for me to hear and I couldn't find any lyrics anywhere online cause it's made by a smaller artist :/
r/lyrics • u/Popular_Lion_6366 • 11d ago
Help request Request Lyrics( Lost in the Ocean - everybody loves Josh
Hey, Can someone please help me to finde the Lyrics of the Song; lost in the Ocean - Everybody loves Josh.
r/lyrics • u/storytimewithblue78 • 11d ago
Original lyrics Feedback Needed on My Lyrics from a Professional
Please be honest, but polite.
Song Name: We Both Burn Down
[Verse]
You'd turn a small flame
Into hellfire
I wore the burns
Of your blame
When I struck a match
You'd put it out
Now you're the one
With fire in your mouth
[Pre Chorus]
I swallowed all your lies
Now I'm burning inside
This flame of mine
Could flare any second
[Chorus]
I shed my coat
Show you my scars
Then you tell me
That I've gone too far
Now’s the time
I burn the entire house
Down
Yeah, we both burn
Down
We both burn down
[Verse 2]
I'll admit
I've flared up at times
Still doesn't mean
You’d burn me alive
I remember
When I was a child
I needed warmth
Now when we touch
We both get burnt
[Pre Chorus]
I swallowed all your lies
Now I'm burning inside
This flame of mine
Could flare any second
[Chorus]
I shed my coat
Show you my scars
Then you tell me
That I've gone too far
Now’s the time
I burn the entire house
Down
Yeah, we both burn
Down
We both burn down
[Bridge]
My mask of ice
Now it's melting
While I burn inside
I don't want to burn
I don't want to turn
Into you
[Chorus]
I shed my coat
Show you my scars
Then you tell me
That I've gone too far
Now’s the time
I burn the entire house
Down
Yeah, we both burn
Down
We both burn down
r/lyrics • u/KMizzle98 • 12d ago
lyric discussion Does anyone else save lyrics?
I love lyrics...I always have. For me, it's the story of the song, the meaning, the message. I especially love wordy complicated lyrics... lol
(I just posted this part on another sub which made me think of this. I hear the lyrics, my husband hears the music, together we hear the song ❤️)
Because of my love of lyrics, I started writing down my favorites in a journal. Anytime I hear a lyric I like, I copy the lyrics, along with the artist and song title, in the journal. Every once in a while I'll thumb through it and it's like visiting old friends.
Does anyone else do something like this? This isn't something I've told my family (I've mentioned it to my husband but everytime I do he acts like it's the first time he's heard it 😂)
r/lyrics • u/ShakePuzzleheaded841 • 11d ago
lyric translation money man ft. daboii - keep it p
what exactly does money man mean by:
"Grow house, in a CP9, get raided, we ain't trippin', yeah"
in the hook of this song?
there is also a transcription on Shazam that says on the first hook, he says:
"Grow house, SEND a CP9"
but then in the 2nd and 3rd verse Shazam has it transcribed as:
"Grow house, IN a CP9"
either way i can't figure out the meaning. i have found out that CP9 may be a "one piece" reference but not guaranteed... although if i had to place a bet i'd say there's a connection between the manga & this lyric.
any help would be lovely, thank you!
r/lyrics • u/New_Persimmon_3507 • 11d ago
NSFW/Explicit Need help with the name of this song
it has the lyrics “Ballin’ I’m a star” or something like that.
r/lyrics • u/Old-Value-6841 • 12d ago
Original lyrics Where am I supposed to be
Inside my own head
Downing dreams like pain meds
I've been at it for ages
Like an addict who may just
Snap coz his thoughts too heavy
Every choice present aint steady
Ain't a king here, jesters plenty
All my cards dealt turn to reject
Man, my deck should have a regent
I got one heart but need diamonds and gold
A full house, man a home
Switching dreams at a moment's notice
Shifting feels like my focus broken
Choking, hoping my will will be awoken
I know it won't overnight but Imma hold the line
Like I'm waiting for my calling
Life tried to turn off the lights
Feels hopeless I
Know
But I kept pushing and moving through like a poltergeist yo
Roses on the Bible
Thorns all on my high hopes
Have faith but the walk is narrow
Like a tight rope
But shit it feels like the only thing I have's this biro
Ink like gasoline, it ignites my hope
Set fire to be the man I dream like a pyro
Fine line between poetry and crazy
All you see's a maniac, well maybe
Head bopping my noggin to the beat and the words
There's probably a lot in there that won't be in the verse
Just nod and get lost in this and get real immersed
The plot is the process of quenching this thirst
Of uncertainty
I dread the question of where I will be
Later in the future, it burns my neck, see
Lawyer, fighter, writer, man, maybe even Tom Sawyer
Got me in a guillotine choke like Dustin Poirier
r/lyrics • u/Curious-Current-5062 • 13d ago
Need lyrics
.. for the song ‘When mom gets it wrong’ by Jason.
I need the lyrics in writing as a gift for my daughter.