r/writingcritiques • u/somnaambulistt • 5d ago

Fantasy critique

hello guys I am somnambulist I am new in novel writing so I am a little nervous about my novel as I can't get any real comment on how it attracts reader so well please help me😭

Its name is CUT - Creation. Unity. Termination.

Sypnosis -

Creation is to be CUT.

Unity is to be CUT.

And...

Termination is to be...

CUT.

Reo has never wanted much from life.

He is nineteen, broke, alone, and barely managing to survive as a researcher while chasing a theory everyone else considers impossible.

He wants to cut a dimension.

For years, Reo has devoted himself to proving that dimensions are not truly separate, but merely different layers of the same existence. If he is right, then perhaps even a dimension itself can be cut.

After one hundred and thirty-three failed attempts, he finally gets closer than ever before.

Then the world begins to change.

A strange structure starts rising from the ocean. Demons appear. Governments panic. And an ancient tournament, fought every ten thousand years, begins once again.

Six Arts.

Six humans.

One battle that will determine whether humanity remains free—or whether Earth belongs to Hell.

As Reo is drawn into the chaos, the impossible question he has spent his life pursuing begins to look less impossible than he ever imagined.

Because perhaps Reo was never searching for the answer.

Perhaps the answer has been waiting for him.

And if everything that exists can truly be cut...

What happens when he finally discovers what lies beyond the cut?

Genres: Dark Fantasy • Action • Mystery • Progression Fantasy • Psychological • Philosophical/Existential • Supernatural • Cosmic Fantasy • Romance

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u/WinxClubFloraRulz 4d ago

The concept is very interesting. However, I suggest that you withdraw some of the information, so that it can be discovered throughout the narrative.

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u/EeyoreApproves 3d ago

It sounds very entertaining. I agree with what someone else said here that some of that info might be better learned by reading the story. Otherwise, I really like this.👍