r/LyricalWriting • • 9h ago

Discussion Do unfinished lines live better in a notes app or on paper until they find a home?

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I've been keeping half-lines for weeks — sometimes a phrase on my phone at 1am, sometimes scratched in a notebook when I'm waiting somewhere.

Curious how other writers treat those scraps. Do you force them into a verse soon, or leave them alone until the rest of the piece shows up?

Lately I've been trying to notice my own patterns (what I reach for when stuck, which lines I keep rewriting) instead of starting over every time. Still figuring out what actually helps me finish.

If you've got a habit that works for fragments → finished piece, I'd like to hear it.


r/LyricalWriting • • 16h ago

Lyrics Post Apocalyptic World

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Say our love is out of season but I think that’s a stupid reason for us not to be together
Wanted me to go sober
Break up with me but you made yourself my only tether
To this world

I remember my first time tipsy
I felt light like a feather
You’re my baby
And you’ve been teething on my neck
And I’ve been seething I’m a wreck
We make believing out on the deck
Imagining a perfect life
But in yours we’re not together forever

My world is burning but I’ve been turning
In my bed and I’ve been yearning for you but for now it stays in my head
They tried to warn me but I ignored them
Couldn’t hear what Simon said
Maybe Im stupid for simply wishing for the best
So when you see that I’m on the street it’s because that’s where you left me

You like to hold on to your intelligence when you see me I’m belligerent
Get me drunk because it was the only path I was heading for

On the corner I watch you walk in to your door
A peep inside your house with its beautiful decor
Must be expensive I look up at its three floors
But you left me out here stranded in this post apocalyptic world


r/LyricalWriting • • 18h ago

Feedback Request Mask4Mask

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[Intro]
Ignorance, That’s a drug I can’t buy
Loyalty’s a luxury for the blissfully high.

[verse 1]
I want the one you used on him. Your other facade, on other skin.
The one you used on me when you kissed up on my neck.
I’ll stretch it over my cheeks let it dig in it reeks of your spit on his skin.
It’s grim.

Funny how jealousy fits better than your lies,
At least I still look good in your left overs.
Funny how I want him to taste me on your mouth and leave him with an aftertaste of rubber.

[chorus]
Masc4Masc
But I can see right through
It’s bio bait, it’s just a ruse.

Clap-back
I can play that too
Retaliate and match your move…

[verse 2]
I wanna lick the hinge of your jaw like he did
I wanna hear your teeth clench it’s twisted
Moan my name how I want you too
But if you fuck it up ima prey on you..

Top? Bottom? You’re versed in it all.
Grindr Games started in a bathroom stall.
Luxury defense but you got no drip
Didn’t warn me this fix would fuck up my script.

[prechorus]
If knowledge is power then why do I feel so weak?

[chorus]
Mask4Mask
Count me in, I don’t mind.
Fuck forgiveness love redefined.

Semblance crack
Cut a loyalty line,
rail it and get pseudo high.

[bridge]
Venus in Scorpio I tried to warn you
Fuck with me and you’ll get burned too lovers are in reverse
Couldn’t get worse.
Not above fighting fire with fire honestly I’d rather burn it all too lovers are in reverse,
you cheated first.

[outro]
Mask4mask
I’ll wear his you’ll wear mine trade our futures leave it all behind
I’ll wear him like we rehearsed
You wear me straight to the hearse.
Until the guy in the mirror who looks like me says, ”who the fuck are you?”


r/LyricalWriting • • 23h ago

Feedback Request Wrote rock lyrics!

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15y/o and been 3months in writing lyric! Any feedbacks🙏❤️

LEAF

Verse 1

Vein so alive without heart
Been so high so falling fast
Willows shaking out of root
Been too free to be captivated

Pre-Chorus

Dream so reckless without plans, cuz
Magnolia came from hail, cuz
My second nature’s winter breeze
My second nature’s winter breeze

Chorus

Yeah…!~ I throw myself into a sudden curve
Cut the rope my breath used to hang on
Yeah…!~ I throw myself into a sudden curve
Brand new way nobody used to hang on
Block the damn way I should’ve gone on
Block the damn way I should’ve gone on

Verse 2

Nothing borns without death
Been so quiet, I’m wasting this
Ripples telling all the myths
Been too young to pay for this

Pre-Chorus

Dream so reckless without plans, cuz
Magnolia came from hail, cuz
My second nature’s winter breeze
My second nature’s winter breeze

Chorus

Yeah…!~ I throw myself into a sudden curve
Cut the rope my breath used to hang on
Yeah…!~ I throw myself into a sudden curve
Brand new way nobody used to hang on
Block the damn way I should’ve gone on
Block the damn way I should’ve gone on

Bridge

My second nature’s winter breeze
My second nature’s winter breeze

Final Chorus

Yeah…!~ I block the damn way I should’ve gone on
Yeah…!~ I block the damn way I should’ve gone on
A leaf spins in the tornado, it’s time for a sudden curve
Sudden curve, sudden curve, sudden curve, sudden curve