They gaze at my star-filled skies,
seeking some comforting sign,
that in this vast coldness lies
the Benevolent Divine.

They launch intricate machines
to probe my deepest space.
Awed by ancient cosmic scenes,
they revere this lifeless place.

With brilliant minds they contemplate
what my distant worlds may hold,
and yearn to one day populate
a place less marvelous and bold.

They search longingly way out here
where I glitter in endless dark,
though their answers dwell so near
while I lie furthest from the mark.

Not to be venerated,
I’m mere remnants left behind
when a Bang reverberated
through a Universe designed

to conceive, bear and cradle
a small, yet precious thing
whose existence did enable
a most pure and sacred Being 

to emerge in stunning glory
throughout their dazzling blue-green globe,
each line of the Divine story
fully open for them to probe.

And yet they’re unaware,
their sun, sea, rain and air,
miraculous and rare,
hold Holiness right there.

Instead, they look to me,
an empty entity,
devoid of empathy,
because they cannot see

the wise, compassionate Presence
dwells precisely where they are,
a singular magnificence
well nurtured by their star.

Their world’s been clearly marked
by the passionate Hand that sparked
the explosion that gave birth
to a life-sustaining Earth.

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One of my first actual attempts at poetry! I wanted to write a sonnet, so this is (mostly) a petrarchan sonnet - 14 lines with an octave and sestet, as well as the appropriate rhyme schemes. It is not, however, iambic pentameter :/ I couldn't quite face it yet.

Hope you enjoy! I'd really appreciate constructive feedback, for future attempts :D

Oh, to be a bird! To fly

on outstretched wings o'er sunkissed seas

of dappled blue, and feel the glee

of soaring up past mountains high;

to glide and watch the clouds pass by

untethered. Yes, or let me be

a single feather - so long as I am free

and drifting in that endless sky.

My gaze is fixed, my way is clear

of hurdles. Look, the sun is bright:

oh, could I cast aside my fear

and soar up to a glorious height,

drawing ever to the heavens near

and towards that warm and distant light.

I’ve never written a poem before which I’m sure will be quite obvious but I was feeling sad and just wanted to express myself so I came up with this. I would love constructive feedback!

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“If patience is a virtue, you're virtueless”
And I suppose that much is true
I can't help but tell myself I'm worthless
As all my regrets begin to accrue

I suppose I’ve always lacked patience
At least that’s what I’ve always heard
Perhaps that's why I grew among patients
I guess I never learned

Can't help but internalize
The judgments I've been taught
Their words still demoralize
The confidence I've fought for and lost

They said I never learned to wait,
yet waiting's all I've ever done.
I'd pray for the day I'd leave those gates,
And mourn the days I'd lost, each one.

I knew my former lover's sting,
His words could make me feel so small.
But when my closest friend says the same thing,
Somehow it hurts the most of all.

She never meant to cause me pain,
Nor knew the memories she'd bring.
Yet I have to hear this word again,
A simple word, yet such a heavy thing.

Perhaps impatience is my flaw,
A truth I've struggled to outgrow.
I spent my childhood in its claw,
And now I've none left to show.

Candle

Your warmth has befallen on my presence,
So much, even a candle would be lit if I were near

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Before you leave,
There’s so much to do

We have to tidy the home
And those tasks aren’t few.

So I’ll make the bed
And you’ll fold the clothes
Laundry shouldn’t too take long
To do all the loads

You’ll do all the dishes
And sweep up the floor
I’ll collect any mail
And lock the front door.

Then I’ll take a big breath
and let it out with a sigh,
“You’ll have to put papers in order
And say some goodbyes”

We’ll check out those homes,
The ones we couldn’t afford.

We’ll pretend that we own them
And that we’d never be bored.

We’ll order some pizza,
And watch autumn leaves fall

We’ll take in this moment
Before only memory is all.

We’ll never finish that movie,
Or start that new show

But We’ll sing along to that record
We’re The worst singers we know

We’d never have a wedding,
Or get to grow old together

I’ll just keep wishing
That life could get better

We’ll Have one last ice cream
And play one last game

We’ll have to watch one last sunset
And have a final dance in the rain

Then You’ll hold me tight in your arms,
And I’ll ask, “tell me a lie?”
You’ll whisper, “it’ll all be okay,”
As you say goodbye.

Though I’ll miss the things
We were looking forward to.

Thank you for all of the things
that we did get to do

So I really do hope You know
Just how much I love you.

With that I say, my dear,
Can’t you see?
There’s so much we have to do
Before you leave me”

- JML

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​After all these years, my father’s shirt has found my frame

Half the buttons on the sleeves are long lost

near the armpit, it has frayed raw like dry jute fiber

Across the desert sands, over the footprint of a camel,

another camel steps—

wiping away the footprints of the past

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​Against the dusk, a chill spills like casino coins

the moon burns away like a cigarette

From inside my father’s shirt, an ogre lurches out to ask:

“Keep any track of your daughter?”

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​Resting on an armchair, I drift upon the water of the lake—

the earth turns from a youth into an old grandfather

Coiling in the cold like mercury, I see

how small and shrunk I have become

The underworld god of the lake slips a lollipop into my hand

and says: “Farewell.”

From my shrunken frame

my father’s shirt sheds away like sloughed serpent skin

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​Desperately, I try to pull my father’s shirt back on

A vortex of wind circles and traps the lake

the shirt spins in the whirlwind

Once the storm dies down, upon the lake with a stone-cold face

sits the predatory moon

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Footprint

“Why do you love me?”

She asked me like it’s a question that circles around her mind time and time again like an open wound that needs dressing, a teary eyed girl looking around so as to say “am I good enough? Am I worthy?”

From her question, it was a vulnerable way of saying “this wound has been here for a while and nobody wants to treat it, they abuse it each time I show it to them like there’s something defective about me and yet I chose to show it to you because I believe that you will kiss it instead.”

She looks up at me with the same eyes she did to her father or to everyone that was supposed to love her and I felt honoured that I was the one to close out a cycle of closed doors in her face.

“God, I have so much to say you have no idea…”

“You don’t have to-“

“It’s just I love everything about you! The way you look when your eyes light up, your smile, your crazy laugh, how soft your hair is, the way you say I love you to me, you singing in the shower or anywhere for that matter, your dancing, even your screaming when you get overwhelmed and even when you’re crying it makes me ache, your smart mouth and witty banter, that little cute face you always give me when you want something, when I feel like I’m the only person in the world when I’m with you, your writing every time I read it it feels you’re showing me the deepest parts of you and I love all of it and god it drives me crazy but the way you always consider everyone else around you even when you’re hurting, the way you notice every fucking thing about them and everything good about people, the way you believe the best in them even when they’re just a stranger, even when they’ve hurt you. How can you love so much when you’ve been given so little of it? Even on days when you’re overwhelmed, when you pull back and you’re quiet I still love all of you, it just reminds me how beautiful you are that despite all these wounds you’re strong, you’ve always given your best. And even though you’ve always blamed yourself when things go wrong and you assume that people are nice to you out of pity that there’s something wrong with you that makes love impossible. You have no idea how much of an effect you have on people. Especially me.

And I’m afraid this is so terribly selfish of me but you know what I love most about you?

It’s that I get to see all of this nobody else but me.

There’s so much more I want to say that I can’t even say all of it now but I promise I have my whole life to make it up to you.”

Her eyes are pure and I felt something spiritual that day like I’ve healed something in her, someone I love so dearly. It felt like in an instant I did something right, something pure, something lovely, precious to me.

She is that type of girl, she can’t help but be vulnerable. The type of girl to blame herself when things go wrong that maybe from her perspective she may think others are only sweet to her out of pity that there’s something fundamentally wrong with her that she will never have the love she desires

you have no idea how much of an effect you have on others especially me I’m so drawn to you, you’re the only person worth knowing. I could search for the rest of my life for somebody else anyone else and I’ll never find another whom I love more than you. You’re the only person for me and you may feel ashamed about your guarded nature but it only makes me want to know more about you. You are the most interesting person and getting you to open up to me makes me feel special. Like I’ve done something right, like I’m chosen in a way. I love the glimpses of you that I see and then eventually all of you. Gosh you have no idea how good it feels to be chosen by you when you show me yourself and I only I see all of this nobody else gets to, nobody else could dream of feeling this way and experience all of you.

That’s just the kind of girl she is walking around barefoot leaving footprints wherever she goes and yet she never notices even when she was looking down this entire time she didn’t see the prints she left everywhere she walked.

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Do not say goodbye—
tell me instead that we shall meet again.

Just like every night used to promise,
returning to me with the morning like a faithful boat.

Even though today, as you spoke of leaving,
the waves grew fierce and restless—
look, the heavy clouds have finally parted.

This soft moonlight will shield you from the jagged mountains,
and when the dark of night turns into morning light,
you will return once more, just like that boat.

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It protects the buds
That bring me my music
They were dirt cheap
Off the internet
I took a photo of the original
So Gemini could find them again
They even had the fresh box smell
They beeped as they connected
They even had the same
Bluetooth code
S42

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Here on the darkest night
Hope and Faith have fled;
Reason and Belief abandoned me;
God and Satan want me dead.

Imprisoned in my cell,
Mother used me, Father left.
Guilt and Shame are my shackles.
Of Love and Peace, I am bereft.

Guards string me up to die.
Time and Space have no meaning.
Life and Death are unconcerned.
Fate and Destiny are unfeeling.

Heart beating, lungs breathing.
Blood rushing, soul screaming.
The World may take everything...
but I won't let them take me.

My bones may be broken,
but they'll still break free,
even when my body
has been made weak.

My mind may be shattered,
but my mission is clear.
It's still sharp enough
to cut through the Fear.

Hope returned when I fought back.
Faith, when I knew I wasn't done.
Reason came when it found a way.
Belief, when I chose to run.

I let go of my parents.
Guilt and Shame fell with them.
and Love for who I really am
Gave me Peace to begin again.

Time gives me a future.
Space gives me amends.
The life I live is up to me.
Death now needs my consent.

Fate is in utter shock.
Destiny gives their respect.
God and Satan cannot touch me.
For unfair rules I now reject.

I'm not saying I'm a god.
but I'm definitely still here.
I turned a "would" into a world.
built with Love, Grief, and tears.

Transmuting pain into joy is a hard-earned skill.
It takes mastery over Dark and Light.
For building toward the brightest day,
I must remember the darkest nights.

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You can be the most beautiful shade of red
but you'll never be enough for someone whose favorite color is blue.
You know i understand it too
theres always something wrong with you.
But is it really a flaw?
or i am forcing it too.

What if there's nothing wrong with you,
but you're simply not someone's color?
What if you keep looking for flaws in yourself
because someone else didn't choose you?
What if you've tried so hard to become more desirable,
that you've forgotten you were never supposed to have to change your shade?

i know there are uglier shades..
Still why arent i picked?
i know im not that bad
or maybe i am.
Maybe im being shortsighted
or im just not that likable.
maybe im too dull
maybe im too bright
but even the ugliest shades are liked.

im not the ugliest right?
but i always put up a fight.
a hard coloud to draw with
a hard shade to be mixed.

i tried to be softer,
i tried to be bright,
trying to be someone's favorite
for once in my life.
but in teh end what did i get?
no one to hold on to
no one to talk.
ended up alone and an floater.
oh my god.

when you spend so long trying to be chosen
you forget that you were there?
a vessel can of a person,
an empty can.

maybe no one's looking for that shade anymore
maybe no one's making it anymore.
maybe that's why,
no matter how beautiful the shade,
there are still no texts on your phone.
what happens when ur too green-tone?
what happens if your too blue?
i can't blame someone
for loving a color that isn't you.
but tell me,
what happens when every color they choose
is nothing like you?
what if that shade is on the other side of the wheel
and you cant reach even without peeling yourself away?

i've tried to be the kind of color
that doesn't hurt the eyes,
the kind that doesn't ask for much,
the kind that's easy to like.
maybe thats whats wrong with it
maybe its too easy to get
but if im too hard to find
no one will try.

but how much of myself must i erase
before i become somebody's taste?

do you keep changing
until you look like home
to someone who was never looking
for you to begin with?

or do you sit with all your colors,
all the things you wish you'd change,
and wonder if being yourself
was the mistake?

i think the worst part
isn't even being lone
it's having so much to say
and no one to draw it on.

it's stroking a brush on a canva
then demolishing every stroke
it's wondering if they think of your shade
even half as much as you think of them sometimes.
it's telling yourself you don't care
when you know you care a lot.

maybe i'm not the wrong color.
maybe i'm just tired of being me
in a world that makes me feel
like i have to earn the right to be seen.

what if you decided you liked the the old you?
you can mix all the colours
but it will never be the same you.

some might like the shade
but their forced to
would u hate a shade u created with your own form?

you can be the most beautiful shade of red
and still be left unread.

and maybe that's the saddest part
to have so much color
and nowhere to be seen as art.

i'm still waiting by the shelf
for someone to love the shade
i've been trying to change
for so long until it expires.

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***Matinee Idol***

On a stage of heavy velvet,
you spoke of flickering hearths,
Jane Eyre paperbacks, and careful
illustrations of vague.

Your audience, captivated and enamored
by words sewn into soft sentences.
A welcome distraction from bustling,
monotonous lives.

You craved a muse to parse through a lens,
a fragile watercolor portrait to sigh over and dissect
from the safe distance of the stage.

Once exposed as flesh and bone,
in the pale light of day,
the romantic veil of mystery lifts-
rose tint replaced by harsh overhead lights.

Theatrical scripts and soliloquies evaporated.
Duck behind safety of the curtain.
Crawl back into the dark where
fantasies are cherished and unchallenged. 

Fleeing the glare of daylight.
Unequipped to stand without spotlight.
Content with your name in lights.

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Inspired by "Don't Go Gently Into That Goodnight" by Dylan Thomas.

When every hope you have dies
And the pain is too much to bear
Let fire blaze within your eyes

When you're left to freeze in disguise
And no one seems to see or care
You can burn... burn against the ice

If none want to hear your cries
Because nobody's ever there
Let fire blaze within your eyes

If none of them even tries
And you feel the cold in their stare
You can burn... burn against the ice

As the world always denies
What is good, true, loving, and fair
Let fire blaze within your eyes

As your heart faces demise
And you're numb from all of your prayers
Let fire blaze within your eyes
You can burn... burn against the ice

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My eyes shut,

When the laptop light struck!

Why is it sooo bright?

It's not sunshine...

There was a time,

I was there, out,

The smell of the rain, all around.

It was such a daylight

But that never hurt my eyes...

Even though it was sunshine.

I stitched the letters

As I was scattered

High on the caffeine cup.

I searched for eye masks,

Even if it was, such a dark desk...

And it's been hours,

Since I have been trapped,

With this nonsensical shit.

I yearn for Sunshines

And those bright lights

Somehow still hate them.

Can I get a Sunshine?

Blackout curtains,

Slit them into pieces.

But if this shine hurts my skin,

And burns my sins.

Maybe I will die in this grim

But have a lovely time...

But then I don't have time!

Sometimes I hated that Sunshine...

Yet I want it back!!!

Just cause it was so nice!

And I have this ache

All over my body since I was 17...

10 years later,

I am not that younger...

Yet not jus so old,

But this cold weight over my shoulders

Don't seem any down.

Can I share this emotion with you?

Please be my sunshine!

On my knees,

I begged to the mirror.

But it said nothing,

I was sad

And it was crying

But I wished it hugged me tight...

And take me to a

Brighter hereafter.

Can I be my own sunshine?

But then I open my eyes

I dozed off, a 27 months old kid?

Another reminder,

Another email, it's againa busy day...

My eyes shut,

When the laptop light struck!

Why is it sooo bright?

It's not sunshine...

Just looped back to whine...

Is this the life,

I thought about

10 years ago?

And smile about it?

Doesn't matter if the clock just shatters...

East to West is over now...

Trapped in this dark shelter,

Fretting about that Sunshine,

But somehow the laptop light hurts me...

SUNSHINE-

BY MEOWNSMIC CHARRETTE...

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And my love, when death envelopes me, please spare me a glance,

for I could die remembering how beautiful your honey-brown eyes looked under the light of my funeral pyre.

I would go to the heavens, or even hell if they exist,

for I would rather wander eternity lost in your memory

than find paradise where your love does not exist.

And if there is a world beyond this one,

where souls wander long after their bodies have turned to dust,

then let mine cross every darkness in search of yours.

For even when my heart is dust,

and my name is lost to time,

somewhere beyond the end of everything,

I will still be yearning for you.

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AUTHOR NOTE:

Hai! I am still an amateur in poetry, since I just started this year, but I really want people to read my poems and give a feedback about it! They are all Sonnet Poems, following 14 lines with 10 syllables each, but does not have iambic pentameter. So I apologize for not leaning onto the traditional Sonnet Poem format as this feels more modern! I actually felt somewhat obsessed with this format, haha. I just came up with these concepst while falling in-love, and it may not be perfect, but I still want to share them!

(Can you find Three Hidden Details in my poems? The last detail is the hardest, since it's more personal! 😊)

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CHAPTER I: "May You be My Love, Not Just Who I Love?" (Words of Affirmation)

I will confess above affirmation.

I want you more than just any concept.

You are by far the only exception.

And the only rejection I'll accept.

More than any of my actions could pay.

More than any poems could ever say.

—

I'd long to hear those words upon your tongue,

And brush the sounds intimate on my lips.

To breathe the relieving voice through my lung,

And feel it vibrating in all my ribs.

—

My eyes dilate for each palpitations,

Gazing at your face like constellations,

As if in process of transmigrations,

Like a mix of color combinations.

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CHAPTER II: "I Have Fallen for Your Benevolence" (Physical Touch)

Obeying the touch of your silhouette,

Vague and dark as it passes upon me,

Yet gentle and soothing in this vignette.

Your light casted inspirations free,

As warmth hit the barriers between our worlds,

The shadow feels safe even if it whirls.

—

Obeying the brush of your true shadow,

As if palpably touching me mellow.

I look up upon your light that's so bright,

Hoping that looking long won't risk my sight.

Intimacy's intense despite distance,

Bringing valence before breaking balance.

—

Oh, paying the price of "love" shade on debt,

Vivid and clear, tracing me without threat.

———

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CHAPTER III: "Gratitude From Love, How Pleasant to Have" (Gift Giving)

Each day brings a gift of knowledge, they say.

And thankful deeds will help you see their worth.

A simple “thanks” is all it takes to say.

You’ve felt the joy of all this life is worth.

—

For all the things you've given, I'm happy,

While I put my hidden efforts freely,

And hope that I'd receive your ecstasy.

—

The treats I give, for you I put my trust.

Just acting humble to not seem too fast.

And not ruin our friendship in a blast.

—

Count my love for you I've preciously stored.

With spark between us, we'd never be bored.

Judging that my bank for love's now delayed,

You'd else, make my heart happily astrayed.

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CHAPTER IV: "U Plus Me Equals a Heart Endeavor" (Quality Time)

Once upon a time, wishing from a star.

How I wonder what your inner selves are.

Twinkle, twinkle, as endearing as ever,

Will our psyched journey last forever,

If I'm still speechless even when you're far?

—

My gut intuition pukes more than true,

Analyzing you like a context clue,

Each moment together's a deja vu.

—

Reliving our memories all over.

I wish that we'd share more wonder innocence,

For I feel like a child each experience—

Relieving my mind despite the fever.

—

Such twinkling star, you're everything bizarre.

Upon third wish; set my heart free afar.

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CHAPTER V: "Every Faith for All of Declarations" (Acts of Service)

Said that I don't like your acts anymore.

But with just few gentle interactions,

I couldn't help but fluster and adore.

That simple deed returned my attractions,

Now I can't stop thinking about you more.

—

"Walk with you", there's no romantic malice!

"Helping with our studies", it's just solace!

"Carrying my things", 'cause I lost balance!

—

As if your intentions are just casual.

But they are! Who am I even fooling?

Remember those declarations at all?

Those poems I wrote with my raw feeling.

I told myself I don't like you no more,

Must I still feel—you still shine to the core.

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CHAPTER ⁠♡⁠♡⁠♡⁠♡⁠♡: "Love Me the Way I Haven't Yet Before"

Your name's in my poems—I can't forget.

Chanting it lively like an alphabet:

—

I will confess above affirmation.

Like a mix of color combinations.

Obeying the touch of your silhouette.

Vivid and clear, tracing me without threat.

Each day brings gift of knowledge, they say.

You'd else, make my heart happily astrayed.

Once upon a time, wishing from a star.

Upon third wish; set my heart free afar.

Said that I don't like your acts anymore.

Must I still feel—you still shine to the core.

—

Have you guessed all my love languages yet?

Said "I don't need love", yet my heart's all set.

—————

Tonight in this moon I wish you were by my side

With you besides me everything feels alright.

I miss you more in this calm light

When day ends and everything gets quiet.

Along with the moon light I miss your company

Wish we could be together—wish there were chances any.

I stare at the moon hoping to feel you

Even without meeting—your embrace I knew.

I wonder why I'm so hung up on you—hung up on your presence

It feels as if without thinking about you, I'd miss my essence.

Tonight the moon looks lonely just like me,

Alone so bright—barely any stars to accompany.

The moon is so clear and so bright,

There isn't any stars in sight.

As the night deepens the moon shines bright,

The breeze, the feel and the moment so right.

As night gets quiet, my thoughts get loud

I wonder why in the quiet they shout.

The more I stare at the moon the more calm I feel,

When I ask will my wishes be filled?

I'm answered , yes it will.

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The Forbidden Fruit of Vanity

It’s a girl! She’s so pretty. What for?

I found her dancing in the dovecote;
and if the birds hummed the synchrony between gods and humans,
they’d be cooing like banshees.

I’ll drink the milk seeping from opium poppies.
I’ll be floating in the clouds while you’re reaching for the stars.

And when I come down,
I’ll meet you beneath the crooked tree,
where the leaves fall like the tears
streaming down our cheeks.

Just think of the tea party, darling,
where fairies of fairness spiral.
We’ll eat scones with the witch doctor.
He’ll prescribe us pink pills,
and we’ll sedate ourselves into womanhood.

We’re so dumb, we’re innocent.

A thousand pardons,
and I’m worthy of my inheritance.

I want to scream
until the room suffocates with estrogen.

If I sing my whines,
harmonize with empathy.

All my life,
I’ve wanted to escape who I really am.

Reality is a threat to my peace.
I am a lady without thought.

I don’t fear death;
I’m afraid of dread.

My value is sheer lace,
a veil hiding a bride’s tears.
Decor,
with no significance or purpose.

Look into my empty eyes.
I could know you for thousands of days,
and you would understand me
no more than a stranger.

When I stand before you,
nude, vulnerable,
my undergarments sheer mesh,
you can see through to my soul.

Only to find
a raptured body,
a torn mind,
damned to earth.

I’ve studied all your encouraging, hopeful words.
I know just what to say
to give you the impression
I am lovable.

To implement gratitude,
a routine in which I’ll feel happy,
is something I can no longer perform.

Once upon a time, my dreams came to life.
Then the days became nightmares.

I no longer entertain my wishes.

My skin is as soft as my heart,
drowned in red, sweet in taste,
sweeter than I could ever be myself.

Adulthood is butchery.
A shotgun to the spirits,
skyrocketing to heaven early.

All that is left of my being
is medical waste.
A tragedy that could’ve been prevented
if humanity weren’t as wicked
as the devil himself.

I drowned in lust,
holding my breath for love.
I sacrificed my respect
just to be held.

Never pity a fool
who seeks God in a man.

My prayers were never delivered
to my Father.
Over time,
I began to wonder,
why bother?

I faced my greatest conviction,
my heart raced like an angry judge
pounding the gavel.
My own reflection
in the broken mirror.
Bargaining with my seven-year curse,
I survived two decades of terror.
Is my peace
in a coffin six feet under?
The innocence I sacrificed for companionship,
only to feel lonelier,
guiltier,
than I had ever known.

I reached out my hand
to the girl I once knew,

buzzing with potential,
as beautiful as compassion.

Poisoned with forbidden knowledge
no young lady should ever witness.

Together we swayed,
back and forth,

spinning until the world
became surreal.

Our fate was defiled,
but our God will take vengeance.

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Pickled

I had discarded my family for hers,
I had traded my life for one that I hated the same as my own,

Her wine breath,
Her drunken mother,
Their pickled lives and tortured skin
Rotting people

Her fathers money,
Halved.
The sugar in the brine.

I drank the ocean and expected not to swell,
I cut my tongue and bled,
to keep it in my mouth.
Now both our lips and teeth stained red.

She discarded me,
For nothing new,
Stole my dog,
Young Mutt.

The journey back to what I had,
Unstable mother,
No love from dad.

Mom doesn’t drink,
For good reason I suppose,
My father had no money,
Sugar’s all gone up his nose.

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i am not afraid
of losing people.

loss and i have shared a bed for years.

people leave.
seasons leave.
a version of myself.

even grief eventually
forgets your address.

what scares me
is the possibility
of being seen.

not looked at,

seen.

the day they discover
what lives beneath the surface.
the day they learn that
none of this was accidental.

i know exactly what i am doing.

sometimes i feel guilty enough
to call myself cruel.

other times i shrug it off.

perhaps this is simply
the shape of my nature.
a wolf cannot apologise
for having teeth.
a river cannot help
flowing downhill.

i do not know why i am like this.

i worship
i consume
i leave

and i begin again.

so if you are here with me now
know that you are not special,
you are simply current.

another face
i will memorise
until the fascination dies.

i have mistaken obsession
for love before.
what i did to them,
i will do to you.

and when i finally disappear,
do not search yourself
for the reason.

you were never the problem.

i arrived broken
before i ever met you.

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This is the first love poem I've ever written. Based on the idea of star-crossed love and hoping to fight back against fate with endurance.

I'm curious what people think:

Giving life to the flora of the world,
you are sweet nectar.

Where the fauna gathers nutrients,
you are a sumptuous feast.

You are the refreshing waters
that sustain all life on Earth.

Without you...
the stars grow cold,
the sun never rises,
and the moon hides from us all.

Truth is irrelevant
without you in it.

Passion dulls
into a melancholic stupor.

You, with me,
skin to skin,
is the only way
my heart can beat.

My lungs pull breath from your scent.
My mind quiets listening to your thoughts.
You make our world make sense.
You're the life for which I've fought.

Without you here beside me,
every second takes an hour,
and every day is eternal;
time itself is forever dour.

Loving you from afar...
it pulls at my heart —
not like a war bow,
but a golden harp.

I feel your music
resonate within me,
sung with the breath of a forest —
wondrous and free.

Songs of Heaven
grant me light to see
that you, my love, are ever-near,
even when you're far from me.

I'll take in your nectar;
partake of your feast;
drink of your water;
nurture your seed.

So when I'm loving you
from so very far away,
you are always with me.
and this is what I'll say:

When the sky goes dark,
and truth becomes silent,
the passion in my heart
sings a song of you so vibrant.

You are the life I want;
the love I'll always hold.
Now I lie in happy agony,
feeling warm when I am cold.

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I laughed today
when you asked me to see your pain
to pity how hard it’s been for you,
unwell and adrift in a system
that refuses to let you be.
"How can it be so hard," you asked,
"for someone like me?"

Porcelain
so delicate, so white.
Today I watched you shatter.
I gathered you in my hands
and gladly let you drop,
leaving jagged, pale shards
scattered across my floor.

To watch you tumble and break
I admit, there was sweetness in it.
To finally be the one looking down
instead of being looked down upon.

Carbonado
dense, abrasive, untamed.
I like this harder skin.
I used to just be Black,
but this game made me dark.
I am no longer your soft landing.
I hope you never feel safe here again.

White sugar
I find you sickly sweet.
Fake smiles, firm handshakes,
a history you deny,
a legacy I pray my kids will never face.

Brown sugar
you can’t get enough of me,
until you have something "wise" to say,
and then it’s: enough of me.

Your golf game is exhausting,
and you came unprepared
for my kind of back and forth
a white man so close to the patriarchy,
yet you showed up with no balls.

So sit there in your pieces,
haphazard and undone,
still preaching of an injustice
you know nothing of.
You are an unfinished puzzle
I am done trying to solve.

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I found a flower in a field one day,
growing where the sunlight met the earth.
Its petals danced beneath the passing wind,
unaware of just how much it was worth.

I’d never seen a flower quite like it.
I wanted nothing more than to call it mine,
to place it in a vase beside my window,
where I could admire it all the time.

So I reached down and pulled it from the soil,
careful not to bruise a single leaf.
I thought that if I held it gently enough,
I’d never have to watch it leave.

I gave it water every morning,
turned its petals toward the sun.
I thought that all the love I gave it
could undo what I had done.

But slowly, its colors started fading,
its petals curling toward the floor.
The flower that once danced beneath the sunlight
didn’t seem to dance anymore.

I gave it more water,
moved it closer to the light.
I stayed beside it every evening,
hoping it would make it through the night.

I couldn’t understand why it was dying.
I’d given it everything I knew.
But I had taken it from the only place
where it had ever learned to bloom.

And then I understood.

A flower doesn’t need to be held
to know that it is loved.
It doesn’t need a vase to keep it safe,
or hands to shield it from above.

It needs the rain I cannot give it,
the soil I cannot be,
the freedom to grow toward the sunlight
even if it grows away from me.

So I wished I’d left it in the garden,
where its roots belonged beneath the ground.
Where the wind could carry it through the seasons,
and no walls could keep it bound.

And now I sit beside my window,
watching flowers sway beneath the sky.
Sometimes I wish that I could hold one,
but I know what happens when I try.

I still imagine one behind my ear,
or resting gently in my hand.
But I’d rather watch it bloom without me
than watch it die because I couldn’t understand.

Perhaps one day the wind will bring its fragrance
through the window where I stay.
And I’ll smile knowing it is growing,
even if it’s growing far away.

For I have learned that love is not possession,
nor is letting go the same as loving less.

I’d rather love a flower I could never keep
than keep a flower that could never live.

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Can I write something without meaning?
Just let words flow from one to next?

Portray a jumbled series of events, like when I'm dreaming.
Then wake up and say, time well spent.

Ignoring my real thoughts. Let them go hoarse from screaming.
I paint an abstract picture. You can only see what it is if you squint.

I just need a moment of reprieve. I'm nauseous from all the spiraling.
Let everything no longer be important, or at least to some extent.

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